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Long overdue art trade with ~Xilent-Knights x) but she loves me, so she waited. (:
hope you like it! thanks love!

xilent (c) :iconxilent-knights:
texture by ~umerr2000
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Here is your requested critique from :iconcriticentrum:~

Improvements:
> First of all, I think a little extra detail in the outfit, such as more folds or creases on the dress, would look brilliant.
> More contrast in the colouring on the skin would help bring out the highlights and shadows even more too. This can be done by using even darker tones in certain areas and not making all of the skin so light.
> A little work on the hands would look good as well, I think~ (I struggle with hands so much T_T I hate telling people to work on them 'cause I suck so badly at them myself ^^; )

Positives:
> The character here is really adorable and you've drawn her brilliantly~ The pose works wonderfully in showing off the character and her outfit.
> The line-art here is really neat, and the colouring is fantastic too. You've done a great job in showing the tones on the material, such as on the cloak and shoes, and the eyes are so pretty as well!
> The way her hair flows and has been coloured is so gorgeous - in fact, this is my favourite part; as well as being a sucker for long, black hair it has been coloured superbly and looks so amazing.

Great job! =D I hope this helps~